This is my Self Assessment week 5/6.

Self Assessment Week 5 and 6 Term 1 2016   Name: Sheyahni

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On a hot sunny Saturday my family and I had a swim in our huge pool. First my family and I got up and had rice bubbles for breakfast. Next my family and I  went to put our togs on. Then we went to go unlock the gate with our key. After that we went to jump into the pool. Then I tried to do a bomb but I back slapped and everyone started to laugh and I started to cry because it heat so bad that I did a back slapped in our pool. The next day when we went for another swim Laviniah backed slapped to and we all started to laugh because she backed slapped. Finally we went to get changed and go to get some lunch for us we had Chinese for lunch and McDonald for dinner. That was the best day I ever had.  

Element Score	Why I gave myself this score
Ideas 3	I can write many simple ideas
StruLan 4	Because I have started with who, where, what, I have time words and I end with a reflection
Org 4	I got a 4 for organisation because my story makes sense.
Vocab 3	I have 3 because I have boring (everyday) words..
Sent/Str 4	I have 4 because I have long sentences and short sentences.
Spell 3	I have 3 for spelling because all everyday words correctly I need to start spelling more difficult words.
Punc  4	I have 4 because I have full stops and capital letters.

My total score is: 21

This means I am writing at level 2p

What my strengths are: Draft 2