The one and only explanation work I have did.

To be successful I will

Start with an introduction that has

• Background information (hocking reading)
• End with a focus question.

Paragraphs that explain the will have

• I will use lead sentences.
• Technical language.
• Metaphors and similes.
• Linking back to my linking question.
• And firstly and secondly.

Conduction that links back to the focus question.

Paragraph 1 why are the predator getting them.

Paragraph 2 is all about cats rats ferrets possum stoat and weasel.

Paragraph 3 is how people can help.

Bats

Have  you  seen any bats that walk on the ground? I haven’t.But I do know that they are warm blooded and they are mammals.What is causing the lesser shot bat.

One reason why our bats are in danger of becoming extinct is because there  are predators killing them.For example rats,stoats,possums all kill bats.They are easy to kill because rats can get them when they are walking on the ground,and possums can klim trees and get into their roots.

What it is harming the bat.

They are not not safe because possums can climb trees and get into their root they will eat the bats.And they can’t eat get food because they are almost exciting. And only their mummy and daddies can fly.The babies can't fly until four to six weeks.

Bats habitat are getting destroyed.

Bats live in the roots.Roots are their home and in the forest.The bats roots are in the tree hollows.The bats eat fruit and insects and seeds.They get them on the ground in the forest.When people cut down the forest trees they will have no food to eat and no homes.

In summary.

Bats help people in several ways. First, there are many species that can eat thousands of mosquitoes and crop destroying insects in an evening. Imagine a whole colony of bats eating away. There are others that pollinate many fruits and nuts that we enjoy.

This is one of tautoro school waka hoe.

This is one of our waka hoe.This is the best one that I like.

Classification Research.

This is my Classification Research By group 4.

The lovely sunshine gift card.

Today I am learning how to make Christmas cards on slides.I liked the part when I said Dear my lovely little sunshine.The part that I didn't like is when I said ho ho ho Merry christmas.

Maths is Awesome!

I was learning to explain how I solve problems. This is what I have done in class.this with W
I liked it when I solved the bank problem.
I found the kumara part hard the first time but then I got the strategy.

This is a lovely story that you can read.You can read it any where you go.

I am learning about this Te nuamu book.

I learnt about the book with my Teacher Whaea Lana.

I liked it when they story told me about where they are.

What I didn't like is when they tell me when sandflies used to eat rotten bacon.

This book that I am reading today is Te nuam.This book is mostly about sandfly they hunt for people bloods.There are eighteen different species.The female sandflies are the only sandflies that hunt for human blood. And that's when the sandflies suck up your blood. So they can Give birth to their baby eggs. When they give birth to their babies they die because they don’t survive for very Long.

My favorite part is when I get to know where they are mostly found in the North or south..

My next goal is to put more detail in my book review.

Fun time wit out Laviniah in Hamilton.

Do you want to see some of my writing while you come to the right place.I am learning to us puns and punctuation.Next time I will use alliteration and similes. 

Warning this is a pretty cool story but u may get permission to read this story.On a lovely shiney Holiday my Family and I went to Hamilton to see my Mum and Dad and cousins.On Thursday Morning.
When we woke up My family and I got up and got dressed into what we were going to wear to Hamilton.A few hours later MY family and I went to the car and went to say goodbye to Our uncles and Aunts.A few minutes later we jumped into the car and started on our way to Hamilton.BANG BANG BANG!!! The Car went!!! The back of the trailer was open.”I said to Uncle Pete”Uncle Uncle Uncle!!!The back of the trailer is BANGING.We pulled over and Stopped..All of the cars were just going Passed and looked at us.
A few minutes later we put it back on and started to go.BOOM!!! The car went.We banged into another car.We all laugh because my “Uncle said you bloody big brick”To the other car because It went straight past us and didn't even think to stop.We stopped in Wous Food to get some Mcdonalds.I got a big mac all the rest got the same thing what I got.When I finished I put it into the rubbish bin and when into the car and waited for the rest to come.They took for ever so I went to sleep.When They got in the car then I woke up.And carried on to Hamilton.When we jumped into the  car.
A little while later we got to Auckland in the traffic.There were heaps of people we knew that we seen in the traffic.In the traffic that's when we got stuck.We had to stay their for ages because their were a big track in the front of us.We got out of the traffic a minute from the tunnel.That's when we got out of the car and when to the toilet.I was busting to go to the toilet.We arrived to Hamilton I wanted to be the first one in but my brother was.We saw the two boys.And when we when over to their house.We went straight to Hohepa and Arama’s Room. Piripi and jah went to play the game Piripi always lost. So we called him pepetona.
That's the best day ever. Good Times.We were playing on the X-box and Jah always got the big screen and kept winning games.I felt happy to see my mum,dad and my cousins.Like my cousin Jah,crystal and Shonta,Anty miss,Anehera and Ti.That was a awesome time.And that was the best day ever.

Animals and Me.

We learnt how t do assonance poem and homophones like.Their,They're and There.Assonance is when you got a vole sound that keeps felling the some like my mind is a oseon my words are a river and it is smooth as Jazz.

This term have been learning to describe. what my friend and I am doing using simple sentences.

This term I have been describing Maori words with my friends.

To be successful we needed to know the kupu Maori for me (ahua) you (koe) he/she (Ia)
Use E aha Ana to ask (what).

Say how I know that I learned something and what is was.
Say what I liked didn't like found easy, found hard, about the learning.
Say something about what your next learning step is.

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Today a lovely singer visit our school. The song that he sang was Touch the sky.

Today Ray bishop visit our school. He was a Duffy hero. What I think about ray bishop is he is a good  singer. My dream is I want to be the best daughter for Mum and Nan.You can learn more about Ray by googling I Dream project.

Do you know why you don't wan't to be a lier? Your nose will get longer.

This week I have been reading Bok Choy and the book is written By Paul Mason and Ant Sang.  This Book is about a boy named Jacob and a man named Miss Bishop. Miss Bishop is a very unliked Nan to have in your life because she looks scary she looks like a  Nan and she would not be that cool. Miss Bishop was being a bully and  mocking the Chinese man the Chinese man won't even care about Miss Bishop.

My Favorite Part is when Miss Bishop gets told off by Jacob's Mum and when Jacob slips and he gets looked after.

My Rotation Work.

School birthday celebration 110th birthday.

Firstly when we go in the school I justed walked to the back in the corridor Sheeandra and me went to get us a dress for us to use.Some of the kids got dressed into some of the olden day clothing. After that an olden day bell rang.

When the bell rang it hered like it was a olden day bell like ding dong ding dong. Then all of the classrooms lined up and walked to the library. When we were walking to the library I felt butterflies in my tummy.I was nervous as because because we were going to do a performance in the front of our nanas and papas. When we go in the front of the nanas and papas we just went to our lines and when to sing our songs. About a hour later the classrooms came out of the library and went back to their classes.When we got back to our classes we did cursive writing is when you have to follow the teacher's writing that she does. I moaned at my teacher “this hard. And when we were getting in class I was getting scared because I wore no olden day clothes. I was scared because I thought I was getting the cane. A few hours later we were just playing games. I was the dumbest at knucklebones in Mrs Paraha’s group. These are the games we played: knucklebones,hopscotch,hula hoops,ring things,spinning tops,marbles and skipping. When we all finished playing the games we all went into the library and did our kapa haka performance.This is the part when I wanted to hide in the hallway so that I wouldn’t be in front of the nanas and papas. But when we got into the library I just didn’t want to fall over. Our first song was Pohiritia so that the whanau could be welcomed into the school. Karangatia ra, that was our first waiata that we  sang. Poi, tititorea was the best songs that we played in the kapa haka performance.And after that the boys did their haka. When the boys finished the haka we did E te Hokowhitu. After we finished doing the last song we did it again with all of the nanas and papas. Papa joe was funny he was just dancing along with our school. When we finished that papa harry blew the candles out with papa Joe.

We had to wait fifteen or nineteen  minutes for the hangi.When we were waiting for the hangi my group was playing spinning tops. When we got our hangi we just went and walked to the deck and eat it all like just in 10 minutes. that was a yummy kai. The best thing out of the hangi was the meat and the pumpkin.This is the amazing part when we ate the hangi. When we got our hangi I just went to the deck and sat and munched it back and I ate it all with Sheeandra & Charlee We all were just eating and laughing. The best part was when I eat the hangi with my friend and cousin. What I really liked was when we played with the spinning tops. I never knew that Tautoro School was going to have 110th birthday for ages and ages and ages and ages. That was the best day I ever, Tautoro School’s ra whanau. I almost cut my finger. Na just joking.

How weird is things?

This is my book rewiev for week 7/8.

This week I have been reading Hinemoa and Tutanekai it is from the Arawa people.

It is mostly about Hinemoa a very young girl who lived with her family at Owhata, on the shores of Lake Rotorua. All the young men in the area had heard about her beauty and wanted to meet her.

The story was sad because they had to split a part Hinemoa and Tutanekai and all the other brothers had to split up too. Like two and two boys. Like how they do it on tv shows.

This week I have been reading Hinemoa and Tutanekai.

This week I have been reading Hinemoa and Tutanekai.

Hinemoa was a very young girl who lived with her family at Owhata, on the shores of Lake Rotorua. All the young men in the area had heard about her beauty and wanted to meet her. One of these men was Tutanekai - a brave warrior who lived on Mokoia Island.  They meet again many times but tutanekai always had turned with his family across the water. Hinemoa and Tutanekai wanted to go away from all of their brothers. So that she can be careful much more.

Here is a link to my blog.

Sheyahni's Blog

This week I have been reading Hinemoa and Tutanekai.

This week I have been reading Hinemoa and Tutanekai.

Hinemoa was a very young girl who lived with her family at Owhata, on the shores of Lake Rotorua. All the young men in the area had heard about her beauty and wanted to meet her. One of these men was Tutanekai - a brave warrior who lived on Mokoia Island.  They meet again many times but tutanekai always had turned with his family across the water. Hinemoa and Tutanekai wanted to go away from all of their brothers. So that she can be careful much more.

Maths problem Solving

My Recount Writing I hope you enjoy.

Friday 20th May 2016.

Start down here.

On a hot sunny Thursday my netball group played a practice game of netball.

First we got a paper from Aunt mere. Next I went to Nana Mavis to sign my netball form.

After that we went to get us a ball to play netball. The people who were playing were Sheeandra,Tehana,Laviniah,Heaven,Amira,Kaya,

Huri-leigh,Waaka,Iveson,Sheyahni.

These were the people who were playing. The netball group were playing past to past It was a funny game. I laughed ’’ aha you're out” and the she said back’’ you are out because I put you out hahahahaha” I sang to Tehanah ‘’you won’’ The first one who got out was Laviniah,Sheyahni,Kohl-lee,Heaven,Tumanako,Amira,

Iverson,Huri-leigh,Maraea,Waaka and Tehanah.

A few minutes later we went to have a drink and have a tollite. I stayed at the drink fountain for ages. That was the best day I’ve ever had. I think Aunty mere is the best. Thank you Aunt mere.  I like the way you teched us.

Here is a link for my blog.
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My maths problem Solving Week 3 : Term 2.

Team 2 Learning goals.

Kiwi kids News.

Did you know that a girl ran a half marathon by mistake? Today in free reading I read about a girl running two hour 43 minutes and  31 seconds. And a police officer found here running she decided she wanted to finish the half marathon about four times longer than she had trained for.

Here is a link that you can look at.

here is my link to my blog

Sheyahni Blog

kiwi kids news

W.A.L.T change a Net to a 3 dimensional.

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Sheyahni's Blog

My book Review.

This week Whaea Lana and my class have been reading us  spooks Incorporated. It is  by

Me and My classroom  have been reading  spooks Incorporated and the author is paul jennings .Spooks Incorporated is all about to Men scaring people for money and so that they sell their houses and they dress up as scary people.

My favourite part was when the two scary men scare mrs pebbles by dressing up in a ghost suit and saying there name is Ned Kelly that haunts the house.

This is my Self Assessment week 5/6.

Self Assessment Week 5 and 6 Term 1 2016   Name: Sheyahni

Paste your draft recount here

On a hot sunny Saturday my family and I had a swim in our huge pool. First my family and I got up and had rice bubbles for breakfast. Next my family and I  went to put our togs on. Then we went to go unlock the gate with our key. After that we went to jump into the pool. Then I tried to do a bomb but I back slapped and everyone started to laugh and I started to cry because it heat so bad that I did a back slapped in our pool. The next day when we went for another swim Laviniah backed slapped to and we all started to laugh because she backed slapped. Finally we went to get changed and go to get some lunch for us we had Chinese for lunch and McDonald for dinner. That was the best day I ever had.  

Element Score	Why I gave myself this score
Ideas 3	I can write many simple ideas
StruLan 4	Because I have started with who, where, what, I have time words and I end with a reflection
Org 4	I got a 4 for organisation because my story makes sense.
Vocab 3	I have 3 because I have boring (everyday) words..
Sent/Str 4	I have 4 because I have long sentences and short sentences.
Spell 3	I have 3 for spelling because all everyday words correctly I need to start spelling more difficult words.
Punc  4	I have 4 because I have full stops and capital letters.

My total score is: 21

This means I am writing at level 2p

What my strengths are: Draft 2

Today in workshop I learnt to find the authors name for the Images I use on my blog

Weekend writing.

Wednesday 6th April 2016. Name Sheyahni Swimming in our pool. On a hot sunny Saturday my family and I had a swim in our huge pool. First my family and I got up and had rice bubbles for breakfast. Next my family and I went to put our tongues on. Then we went to go unlock the gate with our key. After that we went to jump into the pool. Shortly after I tried to do a boom but I buck slapped and everyone started to laugh and I started to cry because it heat so bad that I did a back slapped in our pool. The next day when we went for another swim Laviniah backed slapped to and we all started to laugh because she backed slapped. Finally we went to get changed and go to get some lunch for us we had chinese for lunch and Mcdonalds for dinner that was the best day I ever had.

My number Knowledge.

Today in class we revisited the Kawa of Care, here is my group's comic we made.

Draft 2 What I need to work on next: Carefully choose words and phrases to add information and/or interest.

Name Sheyahni.

On a hot sunny Saturday my family and I had a swim in our huge pool. First my family and I got up and had rice bubbles for breakfast. Next my family and I  went to put our togs on. Then we went to go unlock the gate with our key. After that we went to jump into the pool. Then I tried to do a bomb but I back slapped and everyone started to laugh and I started to cry because it heat so bad that I did a back slapped in our pool. The next day when we went for another swim Laviniah backed slapped to and we all started to laugh because she backed slapped. Finally we went to get changed and go to get some lunch for us we had chinese for lunch and Mcdonalds for dinner. That was the best day I ever had.

What I have been reading.

Last week I read about The Vege Car. It is a  fiction recount and written by peter stevens. The whole book is about the vege car. The Mcdonald's family of Palmerston North isn’t worried about the price of petrol. It They started from bluff and finished at the top of New Zealand .

One of my favorite parts of the story was when jamie's nui decided it was time to build a car that didn’t need petrol. The Vege Car takes vege oil not real oil.

What have you been reading.