Start with an introduction that has
- Background information (hocking reading)
- End with a focus question.
Paragraphs that explain the will have
- I will use lead sentences.
- Technical language.
- Metaphors and similes.
- Linking back to my linking question.
- And firstly and secondly.
Conduction that links back to the focus question.
Paragraph 1 why are the predator getting them.
Paragraph 2 is all about cats rats ferrets possum stoat and weasel.
Paragraph 3 is how people can help.
Have you seen any bats that walk on the ground? I haven’t.But I do know that they are warm blooded and they are mammals.What is causing the lesser shot bat.
One reason why our bats are in danger of becoming extinct is because there are predators killing them.For example rats,stoats,possums all kill bats.They are easy to kill because rats can get them when they are walking on the ground,and possums can klim trees and get into their roots.
What it is harming the bat.
They are not not safe because possums can climb trees and get into their root they will eat the bats.And they can’t eat get food because they are almost exciting. And only their mummy and daddies can fly.The babies can't fly until four to six weeks.
Bats habitat are getting destroyed.
Bats live in the roots.Roots are their home and in the forest.The bats roots are in the tree hollows.The bats eat fruit and insects and seeds.They get them on the ground in the forest.When people cut down the forest trees they will have no food to eat and no homes.
In summary.
Bats help people in several ways. First, there are many species that can eat thousands of mosquitoes and crop destroying insects in an evening. Imagine a whole colony of bats eating away. There are others that pollinate many fruits and nuts that we enjoy.
