Do you want to see some of my writing while you come to the right place.I am learning to us puns and punctuation.Next time I will use alliteration and similes.
Warning this is a pretty cool story but u may get permission to read this story.On a lovely shiney Holiday my Family and I went to Hamilton to see my Mum and Dad and cousins.On Thursday Morning.
When we woke up My family and I got up and got dressed into what we were going to wear to Hamilton.A few hours later MY family and I went to the car and went to say goodbye to Our uncles and Aunts.A few minutes later we jumped into the car and started on our way to Hamilton.BANG BANG BANG!!! The Car went!!! The back of the trailer was open.”I said to Uncle Pete”Uncle Uncle Uncle!!!The back of the trailer is BANGING.We pulled over and Stopped..All of the cars were just going Passed and looked at us.
A few minutes later we put it back on and started to go.BOOM!!! The car went.We banged into another car.We all laugh because my “Uncle said you bloody big brick”To the other car because It went straight past us and didn't even think to stop.We stopped in Wous Food to get some Mcdonalds.I got a big mac all the rest got the same thing what I got.When I finished I put it into the rubbish bin and when into the car and waited for the rest to come.They took for ever so I went to sleep.When They got in the car then I woke up.And carried on to Hamilton.When we jumped into the car.
A little while later we got to Auckland in the traffic.There were heaps of people we knew that we seen in the traffic.In the traffic that's when we got stuck.We had to stay their for ages because their were a big track in the front of us.We got out of the traffic a minute from the tunnel.That's when we got out of the car and when to the toilet.I was busting to go to the toilet.We arrived to Hamilton I wanted to be the first one in but my brother was.We saw the two boys.And when we when over to their house.We went straight to Hohepa and Arama’s Room. Piripi and jah went to play the game Piripi always lost. So we called him pepetona.
That's the best day ever. Good Times.We were playing on the X-box and Jah always got the big screen and kept winning games.I felt happy to see my mum,dad and my cousins.Like my cousin Jah,crystal and Shonta,Anty miss,Anehera and Ti.That was a awesome time.And that was the best day ever.
We learnt how t do assonance poem and homophones like.Their,They're and There.Assonance is when you got a vole sound that keeps felling the some like my mind is a oseon my words are a river and it is smooth as Jazz.
