This is my Self Assessment week 5/6.

Self Assessment Week 5 and 6 Term 1 2016   Name: Sheyahni

Paste your draft recount here

On a hot sunny Saturday my family and I had a swim in our huge pool. First my family and I got up and had rice bubbles for breakfast. Next my family and I  went to put our togs on. Then we went to go unlock the gate with our key. After that we went to jump into the pool. Then I tried to do a bomb but I back slapped and everyone started to laugh and I started to cry because it heat so bad that I did a back slapped in our pool. The next day when we went for another swim Laviniah backed slapped to and we all started to laugh because she backed slapped. Finally we went to get changed and go to get some lunch for us we had Chinese for lunch and McDonald for dinner. That was the best day I ever had.  

Element Score	Why I gave myself this score
Ideas 3	I can write many simple ideas
StruLan 4	Because I have started with who, where, what, I have time words and I end with a reflection
Org 4	I got a 4 for organisation because my story makes sense.
Vocab 3	I have 3 because I have boring (everyday) words..
Sent/Str 4	I have 4 because I have long sentences and short sentences.
Spell 3	I have 3 for spelling because all everyday words correctly I need to start spelling more difficult words.
Punc  4	I have 4 because I have full stops and capital letters.

My total score is: 21

This means I am writing at level 2p

What my strengths are: Draft 2

Today in workshop I learnt to find the authors name for the Images I use on my blog

Weekend writing.

Wednesday 6th April 2016. Name Sheyahni Swimming in our pool. On a hot sunny Saturday my family and I had a swim in our huge pool. First my family and I got up and had rice bubbles for breakfast. Next my family and I went to put our tongues on. Then we went to go unlock the gate with our key. After that we went to jump into the pool. Shortly after I tried to do a boom but I buck slapped and everyone started to laugh and I started to cry because it heat so bad that I did a back slapped in our pool. The next day when we went for another swim Laviniah backed slapped to and we all started to laugh because she backed slapped. Finally we went to get changed and go to get some lunch for us we had chinese for lunch and Mcdonalds for dinner that was the best day I ever had.

My number Knowledge.

Today in class we revisited the Kawa of Care, here is my group's comic we made.

Draft 2 What I need to work on next: Carefully choose words and phrases to add information and/or interest.

Name Sheyahni.

On a hot sunny Saturday my family and I had a swim in our huge pool. First my family and I got up and had rice bubbles for breakfast. Next my family and I  went to put our togs on. Then we went to go unlock the gate with our key. After that we went to jump into the pool. Then I tried to do a bomb but I back slapped and everyone started to laugh and I started to cry because it heat so bad that I did a back slapped in our pool. The next day when we went for another swim Laviniah backed slapped to and we all started to laugh because she backed slapped. Finally we went to get changed and go to get some lunch for us we had chinese for lunch and Mcdonalds for dinner. That was the best day I ever had.

What I have been reading.

Last week I read about The Vege Car. It is a  fiction recount and written by peter stevens. The whole book is about the vege car. The Mcdonald's family of Palmerston North isn’t worried about the price of petrol. It They started from bluff and finished at the top of New Zealand .

One of my favorite parts of the story was when jamie's nui decided it was time to build a car that didn’t need petrol. The Vege Car takes vege oil not real oil.

What have you been reading.