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Friday, May 20, 2016

My Recount Writing I hope you enjoy.

Friday 20th May 2016.


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On a hot sunny Thursday my netball group played a practice game of netball.
First we got a paper from Aunt mere. Next I went to Nana Mavis to sign my netball form.


After that we went to get us a ball to play netball. The people who were playing were Sheeandra,Tehana,Laviniah,Heaven,Amira,Kaya,
Huri-leigh,Waaka,Iveson,Sheyahni.


These were the people who were playing. The netball group were playing past to past It was a funny game. I laughed ’’ aha you're out” and the she said back’’ you are out because I put you out hahahahaha” I sang to Tehanah ‘’you won’’ The first one who got out was Laviniah,Sheyahni,Kohl-lee,Heaven,Tumanako,Amira,
Iverson,Huri-leigh,Maraea,Waaka and Tehanah.
A few minutes later we went to have a drink and have a tollite. I stayed at the drink fountain for ages. That was the best day I’ve ever had. I think Aunty mere is the best. Thank you Aunt mere.  I like the way you teched us.

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My maths problem Solving Week 3 : Term 2.

Tuesday, May 3, 2016

Kiwi kids News.


Did you know that a girl ran a half marathon by mistake? Today in free reading I read about a girl running two hour 43 minutes and  31 seconds. And a police officer found here running she decided she wanted to finish the half marathon about four times longer than she had trained for.


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Thursday, April 14, 2016

My book Review.






This week Whaea Lana and my class have been reading us  spooks Incorporated. It is  by


Me and My classroom  have been reading  spooks Incorporated and the author is paul jennings .Spooks Incorporated is all about to Men scaring people for money and so that they sell their houses and they dress up as scary people.

My favourite part was when the two scary men scare mrs pebbles by dressing up in a ghost suit and saying there name is Ned Kelly that haunts the house.

This is my Self Assessment week 5/6.

Self Assessment Week 5 and 6 Term 1 2016   Name: Sheyahni


Paste your draft recount here
On a hot sunny Saturday my family and I had a swim in our huge pool. First my family and I got up and had rice bubbles for breakfast. Next my family and I  went to put our togs on. Then we went to go unlock the gate with our key. After that we went to jump into the pool. Then I tried to do a bomb but I back slapped and everyone started to laugh and I started to cry because it heat so bad that I did a back slapped in our pool. The next day when we went for another swim Laviniah backed slapped to and we all started to laugh because she backed slapped. Finally we went to get changed and go to get some lunch for us we had Chinese for lunch and McDonald for dinner. That was the best day I ever had.  
Element Score
Why I gave myself this score
Ideas 3
I can write many simple ideas
StruLan 4
Because I have started with who, where, what, I have time words and I end with a reflection
Org 4
I got a 4 for organisation because my story makes sense.  
Vocab 3
I have 3 because I have boring (everyday) words..
Sent/Str 4
I have 4 because I have long sentences and short sentences.
Spell 3
I have 3 for spelling because all everyday words correctly I need to start spelling more difficult words.
Punc  4
I have 4 because I have full stops and capital letters.


My total score is: 21
This means I am writing at level 2p

What my strengths are: Draft 2