The one and only explanation work I have did.

To be successful I will

Start with an introduction that has

• Background information (hocking reading)
• End with a focus question.

Paragraphs that explain the will have

• I will use lead sentences.
• Technical language.
• Metaphors and similes.
• Linking back to my linking question.
• And firstly and secondly.

Conduction that links back to the focus question.

Paragraph 1 why are the predator getting them.

Paragraph 2 is all about cats rats ferrets possum stoat and weasel.

Paragraph 3 is how people can help.

Bats

Have  you  seen any bats that walk on the ground? I haven’t.But I do know that they are warm blooded and they are mammals.What is causing the lesser shot bat.

One reason why our bats are in danger of becoming extinct is because there  are predators killing them.For example rats,stoats,possums all kill bats.They are easy to kill because rats can get them when they are walking on the ground,and possums can klim trees and get into their roots.

What it is harming the bat.

They are not not safe because possums can climb trees and get into their root they will eat the bats.And they can’t eat get food because they are almost exciting. And only their mummy and daddies can fly.The babies can't fly until four to six weeks.

Bats habitat are getting destroyed.

Bats live in the roots.Roots are their home and in the forest.The bats roots are in the tree hollows.The bats eat fruit and insects and seeds.They get them on the ground in the forest.When people cut down the forest trees they will have no food to eat and no homes.

In summary.

Bats help people in several ways. First, there are many species that can eat thousands of mosquitoes and crop destroying insects in an evening. Imagine a whole colony of bats eating away. There are others that pollinate many fruits and nuts that we enjoy.

This is one of tautoro school waka hoe.

This is one of our waka hoe.This is the best one that I like.

Classification Research.

This is my Classification Research By group 4.

The lovely sunshine gift card.

Today I am learning how to make Christmas cards on slides.I liked the part when I said Dear my lovely little sunshine.The part that I didn't like is when I said ho ho ho Merry christmas.

Maths is Awesome!

I was learning to explain how I solve problems. This is what I have done in class.this with W
I liked it when I solved the bank problem.
I found the kumara part hard the first time but then I got the strategy.

This is a lovely story that you can read.You can read it any where you go.

I am learning about this Te nuamu book.

I learnt about the book with my Teacher Whaea Lana.

I liked it when they story told me about where they are.

What I didn't like is when they tell me when sandflies used to eat rotten bacon.

This book that I am reading today is Te nuam.This book is mostly about sandfly they hunt for people bloods.There are eighteen different species.The female sandflies are the only sandflies that hunt for human blood. And that's when the sandflies suck up your blood. So they can Give birth to their baby eggs. When they give birth to their babies they die because they don’t survive for very Long.

My favorite part is when I get to know where they are mostly found in the North or south..

My next goal is to put more detail in my book review.

Fun time wit out Laviniah in Hamilton.

Do you want to see some of my writing while you come to the right place.I am learning to us puns and punctuation.Next time I will use alliteration and similes. 

Warning this is a pretty cool story but u may get permission to read this story.On a lovely shiney Holiday my Family and I went to Hamilton to see my Mum and Dad and cousins.On Thursday Morning.
When we woke up My family and I got up and got dressed into what we were going to wear to Hamilton.A few hours later MY family and I went to the car and went to say goodbye to Our uncles and Aunts.A few minutes later we jumped into the car and started on our way to Hamilton.BANG BANG BANG!!! The Car went!!! The back of the trailer was open.”I said to Uncle Pete”Uncle Uncle Uncle!!!The back of the trailer is BANGING.We pulled over and Stopped..All of the cars were just going Passed and looked at us.
A few minutes later we put it back on and started to go.BOOM!!! The car went.We banged into another car.We all laugh because my “Uncle said you bloody big brick”To the other car because It went straight past us and didn't even think to stop.We stopped in Wous Food to get some Mcdonalds.I got a big mac all the rest got the same thing what I got.When I finished I put it into the rubbish bin and when into the car and waited for the rest to come.They took for ever so I went to sleep.When They got in the car then I woke up.And carried on to Hamilton.When we jumped into the  car.
A little while later we got to Auckland in the traffic.There were heaps of people we knew that we seen in the traffic.In the traffic that's when we got stuck.We had to stay their for ages because their were a big track in the front of us.We got out of the traffic a minute from the tunnel.That's when we got out of the car and when to the toilet.I was busting to go to the toilet.We arrived to Hamilton I wanted to be the first one in but my brother was.We saw the two boys.And when we when over to their house.We went straight to Hohepa and Arama’s Room. Piripi and jah went to play the game Piripi always lost. So we called him pepetona.
That's the best day ever. Good Times.We were playing on the X-box and Jah always got the big screen and kept winning games.I felt happy to see my mum,dad and my cousins.Like my cousin Jah,crystal and Shonta,Anty miss,Anehera and Ti.That was a awesome time.And that was the best day ever.